I have realised that I am aproaching my novel from the wrong standpoint. Juliette seems too "unreal" in my opinion. I want her to be "like everyone else". What I mean is that I wish for her and the rest of the characters to be "human" yet they seem to be bordering or going over beyond the laws of physics. That is not my intention. I shall need to scrap the wings addition as well. The are not possible in the natural world, at least not at the curent moment in time.
I would need to work on it as one of the things to "fix".
I was also thinking to scrap Etienne's side, for the time being. I want it to be Juliette's book, something as a sort of journal she would write for an unknown reader. For it to be left behind for someone to find and perhaps read. I see there are a lot of things to fix, since I see so many wrongs on my part. I cannot seem to make the story flow, and since it is being told from the first person's standpoint, it makes it a bit harder.
But I shall add more parts to the story, and do the final fixes after I finish the last chapter. Which is not yet to come for some time.